I finally got it down. I wrote about all my favorite "senses" I experience as I run outside. I REALLY miss running outside. Screw you, treadmill.
I wanted to post it so I don't lose it, and also, because I'm actually pretty proud of this poem. Although I admit-I think it sounds a little cheesy. But isn't all poetry usually a little cheesy??
I wanted to post it so I don't lose it, and also, because I'm actually pretty proud of this poem. Although I admit-I think it sounds a little cheesy. But isn't all poetry usually a little cheesy??
Anticipation Meets Exhilaration
It's a beautiful and familiar rhythm,
as my feet sink to meet the pavement.
The crunch of fallen leaves,
a rainbow of red, gold, brown, and purple, dances across the earth.
The smell of fresh cut grass,
fills my nostrils, sweet and fragrant like honey.
Anticipation, so strong, as I inhale,
exhilaration, upon exhale.
Legs radiate a welcomed burn,
and lungs, in sync with them.
The bitter, salty taste of sweat,
this, my badge of honor.
Cool, sweet, wonderful water
is my reward, upon my return.
I really like your poem; very descriptive writing.
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